Chapter 1:
The first thing I noticed here was how much this first chapter reminds
me of The Hitchhiker's Guide to the Galaxy. You have a really similar
style and I'm not complaining at all!
I also really appreciated how you used dashes instead of commas, most
people choose to be boring.
I loved the personification and the attention to detail, the way you write
things really makes me feel as if | am there myself.
Final Impression:
I was really hooked on reading this story and youdefinitely did not disappoint! I love your books so, so much and Ihonestly couldn't find much to nitpick at. I hoped this helped at least a tiny bit <3
TIL that major US banks silently got billions in bailouts over the last few months, AND a self-imposed short squeeze by JP Morgan, which
is on the hook to deliver more than 5,900 tons of silver it doesn’t have. Tradeable silver is relatively scarce right now, government data shows.
and
A big problem [ed: for JP Morgan] is that there’s not enough actual silver available for trading to get JP Morgan out of the squeeze it got into through unbridled greed. The more silver prices rise the more JP Morgan gets hurt.
yup sure sounds like the US economic pieces are doing just fine right now! :sarcasm:
Here's a #short video talking about our #ExtraLife campaign! We have some great #Transformers prizes are are hoping to raise 2K for Cincinnati Children's Hospital for #Extralife2025!
Pixelfed is great, its like the old instagram before we were forced to make reels, videos and take 3 cameras with us. One to photograph, one to video and one to video your video videoing your videoing.
Waymo approved to start testing autonomous vehicles at San Francisco International Airport ( www.sf.gov )
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Waymo approved to start testing autonomous vehicles at San Francisco International Airport ( www.sf.gov )
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