The small girl walked down the narrow hallway. She seemed to be hiding from something, or someone. A look of fear came over her as she rounded the corner, seeing her ex-boyfriend being chained and tor...
Hey... This is an original story of mine that've been working on for a few months. So please don't copy, I've worked so hard on this and I'm aiming to publish this as a standalone book series. I wanted to get some feedback by everyone, so I hope you enjoy! :)
The year is 2702, the final remnants of humanity have been doomed to the depths of the ocean by mechanical abominations known as the Apparatus. The surface world is a wasted land plagued by the machines and a deadly Hypertoxin that rots organic matter. To reclaim their rightful home, elite squads of...
This short story is about a girl who was geneticly altered, but there was a complication. Im thinking about making it into a book.. So i would apprieate some feedback, please and thank you
☆☆FEEDBACK GREATLY APPRECIATED☆☆ (images are not mine)
Most days I don't know what happened...why I'm the only person left in the whole world...or at least , in the United States...what's left of it , anyway .
But some days...
Some days , I remember....
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Ghost is the ...
I guess I'll let the story speak for itself this is the first time I'm posting something on here. I only came on this site because people claim you can actually get decent feed back so please give feedback tell me what you actually think. This is just the first chapter of several to this sto...
I wrote this for a contest last year, I unfortunately didn't win but I was hoping you guys might enjoy it. I would greatly appreciate the feedback and let me know if you think I should continue this story.
Just a story idea I've been thinking of and I guess I'd just like to see wheter you guys like it or not. Please leave a comment and ANY feedback would be greatly appreciated! If you guys like it I might eventually get it published but... yeah. Hope you enjoy it! :D
The following contains information regarding my current project, "From One Lost World". I would be cheered to receive any feedback; queries and criticism are welcome. Asking me the hard questions and pointing out inconsistencies enables me to further solidify and flesh-out the world I’ve cre...
(This is just the first chapter I'm looking for feedback on the book or any ideas on where I could elaborate also if something doesn't fit or make sense this is sort of a rough draft btw I got tired of all the romance novels and I anted to do something more interesting) The story takes place...
A riveting tale filled with suspense at every corner and a plot that is sure to catch any readers eye, Once you start you wont want to stop.
Delve into the horrific tale that is Escape.
I look forward to hearing your feedback on my very first story.
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